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Post by account_disabled on Feb 18, 2024 22:45:28 GMT -5
Request free information Today? This bold statement at the bottom is useless. It looks like a call to action and it’s also not adding any value to the page. Why not try something like this: Spaces are filling up fast, request your Free information package by filling out the form above That statement tells the reader exactly what to do and adds some scarcity and urgency to the page. Additional things to test. Right below the form area is a perfect place to put the start date of your next Buy TG Database course: Our next flexible payroll training course starts in just 3 weeks 3. BMI Elite BMI Elite Landing Page There’s a lot going on with this page and the copy isn’t half bad, but there are a few tweaks that could make this page even better. 1. Web Form This form needs some serious testing to make sure they’re not losing any business. First off I would test using a smaller version of the award in the top right corner. Possibly even removing the award banner altogether and just placing “Leads360” below the copy that reads Recognized for industry excellence providing the highest qualified Leads! Free consultation is fine but it would be nice to add some benefit just below the optin headline. Maybe this: Find out how we can get you thousands of leads every single month The form is too long. Firstname/lastname should be consolidated.
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